Tuesday, June 23, 2015

School change my life!

    Everyone has their own life. Have you ever think about things very important that mean you so much. I'm twenty two years old now and still a college student. I think school change my life because it make me feel fresh to everything. There are three effects that school change my life: knowledge, social, develop talents.


    When I was six, everything is change. I went to elementary school and study. Besides playing with classmates, I also learn language, math, science, and art. I enjoy learning foreign languages and hate math. These subjects made me understand that knowledge is very important. In that time, I knew that I can learn many things. I can know the knowledges what I like or the things I don't like.


    Before I went to school, I always play at home and rarely go out. After I went to school, the environment forced me to communicate to other students. First time I felt nervous to make friends then I played with classmates and united friends group. I have to learn watching others every mood. This is the starting of the social life.


    When I was in junior high school, I started to develop some talents. I love singing and dancing. I joined a modern dance crew and won a excellent award of national dance competition. In addition to attending dance crew, I also participated in school choir. These talents make me feel beautiful of life.
Now, I still sing and dance for my hobbies.


    I think that school change me a better life. I received much knowledge from school. Communicating with other students to build the social life. And also, I developed many talents by school. I like to be a student to learn more things. School is a very good choice to everyone.


   

1 comment:

  1. School Has Changed My Life

    Have you ever thought about...?

    This essay is well planned, and pretty well written. Your points are very clear. Nice job!

    You still need to be more careful about tense grammar, however. You do not use the past-tense consistently. In addition, you need to learn to use the perfect tense. It would be very helpful in an essay like this...

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