This is the first we have heard of global warming reaction that the rising earth's surface temperature. From the foregoing description, you should understand how the global warming has a direct impact on the Earth's temperature. If you do not control the amount of greenhouse gas emissions, the average temperature of the Earth estimated rising in approximately 2 degrees Celsius in 2050. That time will be implicated in the changes described below.
Global warming is caused by climate change. Global warming will result in shortening the Northern Hemisphere winter, then more wet and cold. The summer will get longer, hotter and drier. Because of the temperature rises, the increase in the rate of evaporation of water vapor affect rainfall patterns. In some areas into drought are resulting in the expansion of desertification. On the contrary, the increasing rainfall in some areas and the distribution of the plant will be greatly affected.
As global temperatures rising, the melting glaciers in Greenland and Antarctica will increase the ocean water. It estimated to increase in sea level of about 15 to 95 centimeters in 2100. Then the sea also flooded low-lying areas. One third of global residents of living in the edge of the coast, will face the survival threat.
These issues are worthy of our attention. And now the most important thing is that we work together to guard our planet, guard our homes. We are all part of the earth. Let us protect the earth, from now on. I hope everyone can do something. Let's have a clean planet for future generations of children and grandchildren to retain a beautiful planet.
It looks like you did make an effort to plan this essay. However, the logic of your thesis and body paragraphs is a bit strange. For example, in the thesis you claim that "global warming" is caused by "rising earth's surface temperature." In fact, the rising temperatures are an effect of global warming. The cause would be increased greenhouse gas concentration in the atmosphere...
ReplyDeleteAlso, you need to examine the logic in your second body paragraph a little bit. Your second body paragraph claims that "Global warming is caused by climate change." This is not quite right. Climate change is another term for global warming. These two terms mean the same thing. Therefore, one cannot cause the other.
Finally, in your third body paragraph, you mostly talk about the effects of global warming on sea levels. You were supposed to stay focused on causes!
Remember, in essay writing you must stay on topic, and focus on proving your thesis!!!